Breaker Sword of Memories

Hoping to get some feedback Made this in 4 days or so optical flares and twitch ish shieeeet i know xD

not bad, though I found it a bit boring, but probably because I need to go to sleep. For now IDK if it's boring or not.

0:00 - 0:11 - Not Bad but choppy and pacing was slow

0:12 - 0:40 Not Bad but the twitch at the chorus could have been done better and again a little under - syncned

0:41 - 1:14 - at 0:42 bad pink thing transition(becoming overused throughout the amv) Not bad after that but a couple fades should have been accounted for it looks like you just threw them in there because you could(0:54 - 0:57)

1:14 - 1:35 - Enjoyed this part a lot but I realized it had some weird masking in their but still good job on this part

1:35 - 2:12 - TOO MANY fades and they were choppy maybe make them last a little longer but still way too many.

2:12 - End - Not bad again but coming closer and closer to the end it looked like you got a bit lazy, it lacked impact...

Overall, not bad but may part were under - synced and that pink transition...oh my gawd you need to stop using it, it looks like you used as many of those things that you would use in 10 amvs combined haha xD. Also work a bit more on your impact it lacked quite a bit at some parts and those fades need to be accounted for make them longer if you're going to use them, anyway...nice job though, waiting for your next amv !

Those r Sakura transitions thanks for the feedback bro

So yeah, it seemed kind of boring to me, but since it's not my type of style I can't really say anything about it. Though I agree with Kyo and he is most likely correct. So keep at and looking forward to next!

Breaker wrote:Those r Sakura transitions thanks for the feedback bro

Oh, sakura transitions? That sounds pretty interesting...