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[Kisagi] Wanted Love

Post by Kisagi on Fri Jun 20, 2014 12:35 pm



Welp finally it is here, my first amv in 2014! This was pretty difficult for me in the scene selection part because this anime just does not have enough serious scenes. I haven't been editing in more than 3 months and I was finally able to finish this and the outcome seemed pretty good to me. Well enjoy eberyone!



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Post by Rikudo on Fri Jun 20, 2014 1:41 pm

Not bad but it seems like you've made the whole amv without listening the song. In the beginning you followed some beats decently but then you completely ignored the song. The story is easy to follow in the beginning but after the half a lot of character have been included in a pretty random way that makes the video hard to follow.The romance atmosphere has been completely destroyed in the end which  is really confusing, I can't understand what happened. In the whole video many scenes are too long, some zooms are also too slow, and most of the clip in the chorus are too static, seems like there's not a difference between the slow part of the song and the chorus, that in my opinion should be more eventful, more dinamic. Excuse me for my english.


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Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love

Post by Kisagi on Fri Jun 20, 2014 5:37 pm

Could you please tell me where did it start seeming random to you and what do you mean by static?

Also I was never looking for romance, just drama and sadness. We may have different thoughts in the story itself though. And yes it was meant to be confusing

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Post by Rikudo on Fri Jun 20, 2014 7:16 pm

Kisagi wrote:Could you please tell me where did it start seeming random to you and what do you mean by static?
2:38 to 3.00 i can't say what i am watching, many characters appear too suddenly, and their appearance has not a real meaning, i don't know if i explained myself good but i hope so. By static I mean the scenes are too long, you ignored all the beats of the song, the zooms are way too slow, in the chorus we should see faster scenes, or at least something should happen. I didn't watch the anime so it should be easier for me to comment it, but writing this kind of critic right now is being really difficult, somethings the hardcut are way too bad, too rushed (2:13 for example).
Kisagi wrote: And yes it was meant to be confusing
why? It's a drama, why the story have to be confusing? And about confusing I'm not talking about the end, the whole video is confusing, we don't know why the girl cry, why she's sad? what happened?
This is it, if you don't agree let it be

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Post by diegao94 on Fri Jun 20, 2014 7:36 pm

Yeah, the main problem of the video was the dynamism: there wasn't a real difference in the pace between the slow and fast moments of the song. The scenes are always pretty static, the only moment when they are a bit more dynamic is the end, but at that point, almost three minutes of video are already gone. Unfortunately you chose an hard song to edit this anime with, at least for what I can see in your video (I didn't watch the anime).
The story isn't really clear to me too, but usually I don't get the meaning of videos, so maybe it's just me.
You have to choose carefully the song for the anime you want to edit, and if the scenes aren't dynamic like these, you'd better try giving some motion with zooms, pan/crops, etc.
Good luck for your future works Wink

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Post by Kisagi on Fri Jun 20, 2014 7:43 pm

Thanks guys for explaining things to me and giving your opinion! I really appreciate it  Smile 

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Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love

Post by Kisagi on Fri Jun 20, 2014 7:49 pm

oh the reason I said it was meant to be confusing is because it tends to go to present to past and has a lot of repetitions of it in this. Not sure if you were talking about that point, but okay.

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Post by diegao94 on Fri Jun 20, 2014 9:05 pm

You're welcome Smile
Yeah it could be that the reason, to me it seemed pretty random, especially the end. I saw that you tried to make some kind of storyline, but I didn't get it. Sad

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Post by Kisagi on Fri Jun 20, 2014 9:20 pm

lol it's okay I should start doing simpler storylines then

Oh the end was random a bit, I ran out of scenes haha!

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Post by Vipertrix on Sat Jun 21, 2014 3:12 am

Funny this, since the shitty Ddos on Pso2 it seems we have both began editing Razz

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Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love

Post by Kisagi on Sat Jun 21, 2014 3:15 am

Vipertrix wrote:Funny this, since the shitty Ddos on Pso2 it seems we have both began editing Razz

IKR I haven't been editing in more than 3 months!

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Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love

Post by Vipertrix on Sat Jun 21, 2014 4:19 am

Kisagi wrote:
Vipertrix wrote:Funny this, since the shitty Ddos on Pso2 it seems we have both began editing Razz

IKR I haven't been editing in more than 3 months!

Loool I hope they fix the ddos problem pronto. I really want to do my tacos. Last time I heard is that they will give us an Update on the situation on Monday or something like that

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Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love

Post by Kisagi on Sat Jun 21, 2014 6:32 am

I hope so as well, I was soo pissed when it happened... I was almost finished with my full XQ run.

passes wasted  Crying or Very sad 
good thing I had 50+ passes and I'm getting premium soon xD

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Post by Vipertrix on Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:47 am

that's quite a bit of passes, I've created another account so I should get two a day once I unlock the XQ c: And Ive been premium for 1month + 1 week so far I still wonder if my premium would be active after they fix the ddoss. if not then I wonder if i get "compensation" for my premium loss -_- although I think they will give all players some cool items for the long wait and inconvenience =P

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Post by Kisagi on Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:49 am

Actually you only get one pass regardless if you have 2 chrs I tried it

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Post by Vipertrix on Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:55 am

Well that sucks /=

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Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love

Post by Kyoroichi on Sat Jun 21, 2014 12:54 pm

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Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love

Post by Kisagi on Sat Jun 21, 2014 4:34 pm

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