[IC SpeedProof]Kisagi - My last Memory

Oh shit! I can't believe I did this in two days...

Well This was a pretty fun IC, though my computer started screwing with me on the second day and made me pissed. So then after that I said ".......... it! I'm finishing this" and rushed everything in the second half. A few places were kind of weird as well and you begin to notice that I used too many effects and pan/crops, but if I'm not lazy I might just fix it. So in the end I just couldn't bring myself to like this honestly I could have done better, but oh well. If you enjoy it like it seems most people did than that's coo!

Side Note:
I was actually supposed to do drama, so I don't know why in hell I did action where I can't edit the way I like.

Concept/Theme
A girl who fights her way within her memories

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Rape Rape!!!

While it coulda been much better, this is much better than the other stuff I've seen from you. Good improvement =).

Knight wrote:While it coulda been much better, this is much better than the other stuff I've seen from you. Good improvement =).

Really? Thanks man!  

you improve good job  

Thank you!

Very nice to see you improve sir, but there flaws, scene selection, proper transitions and atmosphere you need to work on those but nonetheless nice improvement.

Kyoroichi wrote:Very nice to see you improve sir, but there flaws, scene selection, proper transitions and atmosphere you need to work on those but nonetheless nice improvement.

Thanks!

Yep those scene selections I need to fix

Nice work man its cool to see you improve like Chris said still some flaws but you are getting better and better yoshi!

vipertrix wrote:Nice work man its cool to see you improve :Plike Chris said still some flaws but you are getting better and better yoshi!

Thanks man!

Like everyone said, you did improve a lot. But you still need to improve much more. You should work on your scene selection, transitions, etc. Try to avoid needless camera movements and effects. And yeah, keep improving! XD

Sajid wrote:Like everyone said, you did improve a lot. But you still need to improve much more. You should work on your scene selection, transitions, etc. Try to avoid needless camera movements and effects. And yeah, keep improving!  XD

Thanks man!