Hunter x Hunter [ET] - Already Over

hmm... Not bad... Give me about 2-4 hours and I'll give you a full opinion

Looks good but :
1. Too much zooms,in your slowparts i cant see anything except zooms.
2. 0:44 - 0:48; 0:49 - 0:59; 1:37 - 1:46; 2:12 - 2:18; 03:06 - 3:20; This moment is very bright, and its a big problem. Try don't use contrasts too much.
3.and why you put the shadow like here : 0:58 - 1:03. It looks bad
4. Next time try to find a good episode without this fucking watermark
Good things:
1. I like your action part. Looks pretty good but something i cant understand what characters is doing because of your contrast
2.I really like your Scene selection :lol:but sometimes you put strange moment
3.Nice song :lol:old school baby
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sorry for my english,i hope you understand something. If you share this work here,that means that you needs our opinions right ? so don't be mad if i say something bad,i just wanna help you

Ugly, to be honest I did not like for nothing Scene selection wrong, zoom and mask meaningless and a color that bothers the eyes or kills the video quality, I'm sorry but I did not like

Bad in most if not all aspects.
You started off bad with the bad contrast and bad zoomouts then as I progressed I noticed you only use a few techniques (facepalm) Bad zooms, Fades, Flashes, This mask trick you do with the shadow and this bad contrast. Also the watermark was very distracting, I hate that shit. You need to work on your transition techniques, atmosphere and proper sync, Your AMV was too messy and looked bad, your techniques made it worst. I suggest getting a good beta tester to help you with your work but yea you need to work on a lot of things. This was bad.

i agree with the dudes who have already commented :/
Just follow their advice and you'll improve

Sempai wrote:Looks good but :
1. Too much zooms,in your slowparts i cant see anything except zooms.
2. 0:44 - 0:48; 0:49 - 0:59; 1:37 - 1:46; 2:12 - 2:18; 03:06 - 3:20; This moment is very bright, and its a big problem. Try don't use contrasts too much.
3.and why you put the shadow like here : 0:58 - 1:03. It looks bad
4. Next time try to find a good episode without this fucking watermark
Good things:
1. I like your action part. Looks pretty good but something i cant understand what characters is doing because of your contrast
2.I really like your Scene selection  :lol:but sometimes you put strange moment
3.Nice song :lol:old school baby
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sorry for my english,i hope you understand something. If you share this work here,that means that you needs our opinions right ? so don't be mad if i say something bad,i just wanna help you

Thank You very much on the Opinions Bro i don't get mad , i really get happy and thank you for This Opinions i'll Improve my Best

Its good that you take criticism well, you will surely improve.

Okay since sempai said everything I was going to say, I'm just going to say this:

In the beginning where it fades in the scene selection was a bit bad and the crossfades weren't placed in the right moments.

Then after that at 0:10 - 0:12 there was a huge black gap where after it showed the HxH logo it made it look awkward.

then at 0:21 - 0:39 you really didn't need the overlay

Overall I didn't really like, had too many brighness/contrast, too many blank areas, & some weird scene selection in some places.

I would say more, but again sempai took most of my words... and you should really find a way to remove the tv watermark because that is not cool

anyway, good luck in the future!