The Power Of Youth!
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The Power Of Youth!
by Agito Thu Dec 11, 2014 2:28 pm
Hey guys! It's My first work! i want some criticism from you!
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Re: The Power Of Youth!
by Kyoroichi Fri Dec 12, 2014 2:28 am
0:00 - 0:17 was a really cool build up even though I thought the kakashi and obito scene shouldn't have been there, it looks badly placed.
0:28 when using a leaf transition like this you should make sure it blends properly with the oncoming scene in this case it didn't, no trees or anything in the background just a leaf blows and HOLY SHIT HERE COMES RIN DYING! same problem with 0:48 random leaf
1:16 - 1:17 the itachi mask scene is really dark compared to the scene before, it throws it off for a bit
I have to say some of your masks were really really unnecessary haha, there is no need for a lot of masks! be mindful of how you transition, you even used brightness and contrast transitions too much xD
On the bright side its still a cool amv even though its naruto, gg!
0:28 when using a leaf transition like this you should make sure it blends properly with the oncoming scene in this case it didn't, no trees or anything in the background just a leaf blows and HOLY SHIT HERE COMES RIN DYING! same problem with 0:48 random leaf
1:16 - 1:17 the itachi mask scene is really dark compared to the scene before, it throws it off for a bit
I have to say some of your masks were really really unnecessary haha, there is no need for a lot of masks! be mindful of how you transition, you even used brightness and contrast transitions too much xD
On the bright side its still a cool amv even though its naruto, gg!
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