Ichirin No Hana
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Ichirin No Hana
After months of been inactive I'm back with something new hope you like it.
Song:High and mighty color-Ichirin no hana
Anime:BLEACH
Enjoy !
Last edited by DarkShinigami on Tue Jul 23, 2013 2:53 am; edited 1 time in total
DarkShinigami- Posts : 9
Join date : 2013-07-22
Re: Ichirin No Hana
Well I don't really consider a video less than 1:20 secs an amv, but what the hell. Anyway, since my computer doesn't work anymore I'm going to have to say a few things on my phone so bear with me くま^o^.
I liked the song, but here is a few things that it needs:
- Needs work on the masks
- Needs work on better transitions
- Needs some better impacts
- At 0:30 it needs some effects so that shit can look cool
- And lastly, ..........! Why the hell is it short? Should have used the entire song or at least the opening version of it.
Overall, not bad it was missing quite a lot of things.
p.s
You should make a presentation (Y)
I liked the song, but here is a few things that it needs:
- Needs work on the masks
- Needs work on better transitions
- Needs some better impacts
- At 0:30 it needs some effects so that shit can look cool
- And lastly, ..........! Why the hell is it short? Should have used the entire song or at least the opening version of it.
Overall, not bad it was missing quite a lot of things.
p.s
You should make a presentation (Y)
Re: Ichirin No Hana
1- nyah I like them this way XD
2- I think you just said the same thing twice...
3- By impact you mean stronger pans or more effect's or something else?
4- Everthing after 30 secs was made in 5-10 mins.
5- Is short because this is just an comeback video is not something special or at least I didn't felt like making 3 mins video with that song ( I would probably got bored with it after 1 min... then actually I get bored so...)
But I'm thankful for the tips I indeed see what you mean and think should be better, but after all this is my video. Anyway thanks for the feedback again.
2- I think you just said the same thing twice...
3- By impact you mean stronger pans or more effect's or something else?
4- Everthing after 30 secs was made in 5-10 mins.
5- Is short because this is just an comeback video is not something special or at least I didn't felt like making 3 mins video with that song ( I would probably got bored with it after 1 min... then actually I get bored so...)
But I'm thankful for the tips I indeed see what you mean and think should be better, but after all this is my video. Anyway thanks for the feedback again.
DarkShinigami- Posts : 9
Join date : 2013-07-22
Re: Ichirin No Hana
Ah I see that's why and the impact part, it can be by better scene selection. Also, by me saying the same thing twice, did you mean when I said "bear"? Then yes, I meant to do that.
Re: Ichirin No Hana
Its not bad, some transitions were nice and others were really blah, the text bothered me(yes small things like that bothered me) but I guess it was laziness, and aha the colouring on the first clip was bad I don't see it as anything special but at the same time its still not bad, wasn't a fan of the song but that's a personal opinion, as Kisagi said it lacked impact, I think for the most part sometimes you mismatched the pacing and sync but you missed some other stuff, personally it didn't seem like a MAD to me but yeah still not bad, waiting for your next
Re: Ichirin No Hana
Don't like how the song was a bleach opening, and you used bleach and bleach openings to edit it . Editing wasn't too bad but nothing great. I get that you wanted to make a short comeback video so I won't really critique it much. Good luck on your next few videos.
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