[AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me

Yo, I've finally completed. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit done in a hurry but I can not complain. In comparison to my previous work this is the best, but I want to improve again and reach a very high level of editing I hope you like it.



DL: http://www.mediafire.com/watch/o59zc3qb3yysb6a/%5BOvercreed%5D_Forgive_me.mp4

Author: Overcreed
Studio: NeroTeam
Anime: Fate/Stay Night - Fate/Zero - Fate/C (Game Opening) - Kara no kyoukai - Steins;Gate
Song: Versus the word - Forgive me

You ignored everything I told you to fix.

It's pretty nice

Kyoroichi wrote:You ignored everything I told you to fix.

I removed the dark color and I made the mask like you said.

It was still a bit dark for whatever reason and the buildup was too bright you should have lowered the opacity, you made the clips move way too fast, you depend on speed too much, try different transitions other than zooms, fades..etc. Although the AMV is not bad there are quite a few things you need to fix, the first thing I would suggest is learning more transitions wheather it be masking or not and try not to depend on the super movement on the clips too much its hard to see whats going on.

Kyoroichi wrote:It was still a bit dark for whatever reason and the buildup was too bright you should have lowered the opacity, you made the clips move way too fast, you depend on speed too much, try different transitions other than zooms, fades..etc. Although the AMV is not bad there are quite a few things you need to fix, the first thing I would suggest is learning more transitions wheather it be masking or not and try not to depend on the super movement on the clips too much its hard to see whats going on.

Next time I'll be careful not to make mistakes ^^

I really think this clip could have been top level if you paced it well but anyways you have great potential, I'm always looking forward to your amvs from this amv i think you need to work on following the music more closely. acceleration (too much) there is no feeling to most of the clip especially the calm moment.
but anyways I'm looking forward to your next Also welcome back