[Amv] Tower Of Control

Hello I noticed you guys don't mind criticising, so i was hoping to learn a thing or 2 from you. This was my Entry for Nero Team's IC. Please don't hold back, i need Tips and advices in order to become a Vipertrix *^*

Amv: Tower of Control
Audio: Fighting Kind - beginning again
Anime sources: Air Gear / Karas / Guilty Crown / C - The money of soul and possibilty of control.
I'm actually proud of this. but i'm sure it's got countless flaws that need to be pointed out.
DL Link: http://www.mediafire.com/?0i291srt95qn1qe

0:10 - 0:22 - Sin city effect was uncalled for but I don't know I find your pacing a little bad and scene selection out of place

0:23 - 0:29 - Shakes are too over powering and flashes were bad the first flash you used didn't last long enough..

0:30 - 0:42 - the C clips were random but nicely synced and then Sin city effect came it was uncalled and makes it look messy, masking needs to be worked on plus i think i saw a fade which was really messy

0:43 - 0:48 - Horrible songcut and overpowering shakes again

0:49 - 1:18 - Horrible songcut, sincity effect was messy, its like the same thing over again although this part was edited better but it was undersynced with the zooms btw when zooming dont make the radials strong/noticeable.

1:19 - 1:31 - I'm not sure what you're doing with your shakes but they look choppy, smoothen your pan/crop keyframes and it was undersynced and scene selection and transitions weren't pursued well oh and bad songcut.

1:32 - 1:39 - Bad songcuts all over the place in this amv...this part wasn't anything just an opening there though it synced well at some parts but a bit random

1:40 - 1:53 - Nice idea but the way you actually pursue the idea is kinda bad the clips in it was choppy because of the shakes but still not bad

1:54 - End - Best bit in the amv, things needed to be fixed like sync and a few masks but still my fave bit of the amv. the last karas scene was bad though.

Overall you could do much better but this is an IC so I guess you don't have to take all of it to heart.

Omg thank you so much kyoroichi i knew i came to the right place for critic.
i honestly didn't think all these points were bad, until you pointed it out, and now it all makes perfect sense actually, you're totally right :O i'll make sure to improve my shakes / Audio-cuts / Fx. then i'll come back for another check i hope you don't mind Lol

Glad I can help and no worries keep showing us your improvements ^^

that was a frigging awesome *beta-tester* proof..id rent kyouruichi if id eventually start editing seriously....about the clip..well im just messed up by the previous remarks,,,the shakes did seem a little *brutal* and here and there they kinda made more effect than the actual song(too much power) and some slight , dont know..miss-syncs....it was good vid for an ice...and its 3 mins allmost.dont think i could add anything else besides wut kyo said,,,he was just to OP.....cheers

hi
I do not hang bog I think the music does not fit with your source