Reverse-Online contest 2

Hala our first video for a contest .. the online contest. I think it is not too bad especially since I very apreciated our teamwork and I think that in the future I will do more clip with him ... that is clearer I will divide the work that everyone has had to do so that you can see the improvements that everyone should make.

Zpipo: I was charging effects in general (rotoscoping contrast ....) part of the synch and credits.
Domss94: he has made ​​the choice of the anime, the concept, much of synch and images to place.

lien dll: http://oc2013.tumblr.com/post/46263753677/domss94-zpipo-reverse

not bad, I'll leave an OP later.

I like the song

Not bad. But it has a lot of basic mistakes.

Most of the scenes seemed pretty random to me. And you used a lot of random effects and overlays.

You tried to sync using flashes. That's really not cool. And your don't look good either. They're too hard on the eyes.

The colors are really messy. Mostly because of that contrast. And the way you used various anime destroyed the flow of the clip. You need to find a way to link all the clips to maintain a natural flow. Also, the border (from soft contrast) on some of the clips doesn't look good. Try not to use it. Or find another way to do that.

You need to work on your zooms. Some of the zooms are really random and weird. For example at 1:12, you zoom into the bike and then come out on Oreki's face. At 1:18, if you want to zoom in to his face, you need to move the camera towards his face in the first scene.

You need to work on the hard cuts too. the clips are all badly selected and misplaced.

So yeah, just work on the basics for now before you attempt to do more advanced stuff. Good luck. Hope to see you improve