[TheRedflash66&SCARL3TAMVs]Tempting: First Action

Knight wrote:Wasn't bad but could've been a lot better. During many parts the scenes were as dynamic as they needed to be and the pacing didn't match up well with the song but otherwise good job, keep at it.

Starting:

I got the concept. Even though the scene selection makes it kinda difficult to understand it, I still can see it. Now there are some points I have to mention:

-The differences between the sources. I still don't get it, you could have done an approximation between them by changing them and looking for other sources that look similar and the final video would have probably looked better.
-Typography. Don't you worry, this is a problem between all makers I know. You have to work in it. The one you chose, I didn't like how it blended with the video. This also goes for future posters.
-Disstribution of effects and transitions: It's not just the fact of 'I add this effect for the sake of the effects' it should be logic and understandable why the effect/transition is there and not just to add them without reason
-The fact someone used this song (or a remix I dunno) doesn't mean this video has to be compared with other videos. Unless the other creator really CREATED the song him/herself, then it's ok the comparison. But if not, it's useless to start with the premise:

'But this guy used the same song here (video)'

Because the AMVs are so different, nor we're not even the owners of the material used
-I would have liked to take you for the Level Up. You seem to have the potential to make something awesome but you have to work in several aspects, in order to make that possible.

Don't you worry man, everyone has to start from a point