[Lilcrow] MoonBlade

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[Lilcrow] MoonBlade

Post by Lilcrow972 on Fri Jan 30, 2015 6:25 am


Thx Red !


Hello people ! I present to you my new video I made in 1 week to decompress a little and I took the opportunity to make a dedication to Light because I love his nura amv Very Happy, so there is lot of wink to his clip.
Personally I'm happy with the result although there is a big looseness at the end of the clip because of lack of inspiration.

Well, good viewing to all!
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Anime: Nurarihyon no mago

Music: Palisades - The Reckoning

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DDL: https://mega.co.nz/#!sRUU3abL!1XNI460T1cZzj-dDBh1CoscpcVd8Q9kJqIg3LdSDGpU

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Re: [Lilcrow] MoonBlade

Post by redassaut on Fri Jan 30, 2015 9:45 pm

This is the reckoning !!

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Re: [Lilcrow] MoonBlade

Post by Snaggle on Sun Feb 01, 2015 1:49 pm

Hey, thanks for posting your video here (^▽^).
I'll let you know what I think about it. For the first 10 seconds the fades to black killed the flow, and the unsteady camera didn't really match. Simple camera movements (paining/zooming in/out) with fades to other scene (not to black) would have looked better although you should also try to vary your scenes, all those scenes were essentially the same thing just zoomed out a bit more. To top it off you shouldn't zoom in so much on a shot which is already a close up, nor should the zoom even change speeds like it does (zooming out quickly then slowly zooming out) since the song doesn't even have any beats there or at least you weren't synching to them. You also have quite a few close ups during the action which you should try to avoid having to many of them in the action, it kills the intensity. It seems as though you just use a zoom out/zoom in wherever you can which isn't always the best. Additionally the synch could use some work. The video as a whole is fairly generic, the effects are pretty much the exact same cookie cutter effects I see in most video in the genre (plug in and play like effects not literately the cookie cutter effect >.<). A little bit of variety or creativity would really go a far way in making it less generic. But it still had some cool parts, my favorite was at 0:38-0:51 but 1:31-1:35 was cool as well. As a whole it was okay, it had some problems but some cool parts as well. Try expanding your arsenal in terms of effects or try being creative with the way you use them and I think you next video will be a more enjoyable one . Once again thanks for posting it here, and good luck with your next video (*^ -^*).

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Re: [Lilcrow] MoonBlade

Post by Lilcrow972 on Thu Feb 05, 2015 4:34 am

Thanks for your comment Snaggle ! i'll try to improve on my next video Very Happy

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