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Post by bluEyEz on Thu Aug 15, 2013 11:51 am


Well it suposed to be for one amv contest, but I lost interest so I'm uploading it anyway...
Special thanks to the beta testers ;3:*Llama*: : ahaaah ahaaah ahaaah ahaaah ahaaah ahaaah ahaaah ahaaah



so okay I tried to add a story to it, but i failed big time...anyway it supposed to go this way: Shu saw a big crash from his way to school, a girl who he never saw before was there and wearing his school uniform, the girl said that she was from another galaxy who has come to earth to help Shu stop the alien invasion and only he can do it, and after Shu learned that the fight to save the Earth has begun Neutral  and blablalbalblq kanyway enojy...

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Kisagi on Fri Aug 16, 2013 5:07 am

Hmm... I can see what you tried to do, but let me say this. In the beginning I see that you made it like the description says, but what indicates that she is an alien? To me it seems like Shu is just turning here into a weapon for his own use to fight. I see that she tells him something, but what was the purpose of Gai & Mana in this? How does your story contribute with the ties of other people? And how did the other people get involved? Those are the things that weren't explained well and you mostly just see some senceless action.

Originality:
It's okay, not many of the things were explained very well and as the video carried on it got even more confusing.

Action/Sync
It's okay, the scenes you pick were a bit eh and it needed more sync.

Effects:
As it started off in the very beginning the blurs you did were used in the wrong way. You could have used in in a way were it doesn't mess up your eyes as you are looking at it.

When you do your shakes they come out way too strong and looks really awkward. At 0:13 the zoom was really choppy especially when you put a blur in there, which goes from 0:13 - 0:16. The outward zoom was very choppy and the blur was too strong at 0:19. Next time try going lighter on your blurs you don't need to do anything strong where it's hard to see things.

At 0:20 I find that effect where it looks like eyelids or some thing was a bit un-needed because what was he looking at? I see a nice ceiling, but then the scene changes very quickly. WTF?

At 0:24 the text was not bad, but when seeing text in one scene in the entire video really makes the person watching it say, "What was the point in putting the text if you are only going to do it once? That's pretty useless".

For me or to a lot of people you used way too many fades. Try not to rely on fades when editing, it tends to make the video a bit boring when seeing it after every few scenes.

At 0:53 that digital effect I didn't like, could have been used in a different way.

Overall:
It's okay and I disliked it. As it came along it began to get choppy and the timing wasn't really on point as it should. You should try not relying on fades and watching your effects. You should try improving on your sync, transitions, effect use, and a logical story.

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by bluEyEz on Fri Aug 16, 2013 6:59 am

Kisagi wrote:Hmm... I can see what you tried to do, but let me say this. In the beginning I see that you made it like the description says, but what indicates that she is an alien? To me it seems like Shu is just turning here into a weapon for his own use to fight. I see that she tells him something, but what was the purpose of Gai & Mana in this? How does your story contribute with the ties of other people? And how did the other people get involved? Those are the things that weren't explained well and you mostly just see some senceless action.

Originality:
It's okay, not many of the things were explained very well and as the video carried on it got even more confusing.

Action/Sync
It's okay, the scenes you pick were a bit eh and it needed more sync.

Effects:
As it started off in the very beginning the blurs you did were used in the wrong way. You could have used in in a way were it doesn't mess up your eyes as you are looking at it.

When you do your shakes they come out way too strong and looks really awkward. At 0:13 the zoom was really choppy especially when you put a blur in there, which goes from 0:13 - 0:16. The outward zoom was very choppy and the blur was too strong at 0:19. Next time try going lighter on your blurs you don't need to do anything strong where it's hard to see things.

At 0:20 I find that effect where it looks like eyelids or some thing was a bit un-needed because what was he looking at? I see a nice ceiling, but then the scene changes very quickly. WTF?

At 0:24 the text was not bad, but when seeing text in one scene in the entire video really makes the person watching it say, "What was the point in putting the text if you are only going to do it once? That's pretty useless".

For me or to a lot of people you used way too many fades. Try not to rely on fades when editing, it tends to make the video a bit boring when seeing it after every few scenes.

At 0:53 that digital effect I didn't like, could have been used in a different way.

Overall:
It's okay and I disliked it. As it came along it began to get choppy and the timing wasn't really on point as it should. You should try not relying on fades and watching your effects. You should try improving on your sync, transitions, effect use, and a logical story.
Dude are you retarded? or something, first I think I pointed out that I failed with the story and everything, there was no need to point out that, too manny fades? FADES? ARE YOU RETARDED AGAIN MAY I ASK? There is exactly one "CROSSFADE IN THE ACTION PART AND IT WAS A MASK TRANSITION \MDL*one of the beta testers Didn't had a problem with the shakes I did\ the only thing that you say and make some sense was about that text it wasn't rly needed I just added it to make that scene more interesting but when I watched the video after render I saw it wasn't rly needed, about the fps sync that's probably YT fault the sync was fine in vegas and on my pc.
Work on your vids mby and then try to make some destructive critizm on others vids Llama 

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Kisagi on Fri Aug 16, 2013 7:36 am

please do not use the word "RETADED" when you are replaying to someone just because they are making false assumptions.

I've seen your entire description I even pointed that out when I was saying things. As for the fades I wasn't just talking about the action part, if you notice I never said "in the action part", at all. I don't care if your beta testers didn't have a problem with it I'm just telling you what was off about the video, they can't catch everything you know. Everything I said wasn't false they were on point. You should try searching through the video for the points I said in each frame and you will notice that I was correct.

Anyway, you shouldn't make comments like that because that just causes an arguments and it pisses me off seeing that someone wants to start one.

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by bluEyEz on Fri Aug 16, 2013 7:56 am

Kisagi wrote:please do not use the word "RETADED" when you are replaying to someone just because they are making false assumptions.

I've seen your entire description I even pointed that out when I was saying things. As for the fades I wasn't just talking about the action part, if you notice I never said "in the action part", at all. I don't care if your beta testers didn't have a problem with it I'm just telling you what was off about the video, they can't catch everything you know. Everything I said wasn't false they were on point. You should try searching through the video for the points I said in each frame and you will notice that I was correct.

Anyway, you shouldn't make comments like that because that just causes an arguments and it pisses me off seeing that someone wants to start one.
Again, what makes you think that you are right? and indeed you didn't say the action part, but then that makes it even more off, because there was rly a need to add a crossfade in that parts, there was like the music is so slow in that moments and If I don't make a crossfade there it will look retarded, I may overdid the tard thingy, but you are rly pissing me off, please don't respond in my posts~

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Kisagi on Fri Aug 16, 2013 7:58 am

My god, I never said crossfade

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by bluEyEz on Fri Aug 16, 2013 8:07 am


It's diferrence in tastes. I made this as I wanted it to be, that wasn't experriment, so I won't be changing anything Smile Thanks for your feedback I can't make something that everyone would like... I always get dislikes, but that will not change the way I love to edit, I live for myself;D
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Re: VoidGirl

Post by 995Gabber on Fri Aug 16, 2013 10:19 am

word of advice Kisagi san. when you see a post from this dude... Better ignore it.

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by bluEyEz on Fri Aug 16, 2013 10:52 am

995Gabber wrote:word of advice Kisagi san. when you see a post from this dude... Better ignore it.
listen to this dude ^.^

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Kyoroichi on Fri Aug 16, 2013 11:45 am

lol I'd love to give you criticism but I won't, it would make no sense. If you arent prepared for criticism don't post your AMVS.

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Sempai on Fri Aug 16, 2013 1:45 pm

bluEyEz wrote:about the fps sync that's probably YT fault the sync was fine in vegas and on my pc.
STOP blame youtube >_<. Then send a download link! Evil or Very Mad

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Domius on Fri Aug 16, 2013 8:39 pm

"People hide the facts even to themselves because they're afraid of having to change their opinion." (Marco Travaglio)

I don't like your video and your behaviour, the problem is not YouTube, it's in your noob head.
"YT fault the sync"(cit.)
If you can't convert videos don't cry, please, is not the fault of YouTube.
"It's diferrence in tastes."(cit.)
As you said, i've an opinion about your video and you've a personal opinion about your works don't call Kisagi "retarded", he wasted his time to make a good critique ONLY FOR YOU.
You're just a spoiled child, if you don't accept the criticism talk with the noob people on YouTube who always say "I like your video, it's fantastic, awesome, you're the BEST".

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Vipertrix on Sat Aug 17, 2013 12:22 am

Domius wrote:"People hide the facts even to themselves because they're afraid of having to change their opinion." (Marco Travaglio)
Pas mal 9/10

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by bluEyEz on Sat Aug 17, 2013 6:24 am

You're just a spoiled child, if you don't accept the criticism talk with the noob people on YouTube who always say "I like your video, it's fantastic, awesome, you're the BEST".
~Oh my freakin' god... I don't want to hear how to do things from someone who is not better than me is like you are the boss of some company and you ask the people who are lower than you on how to do your job ? So indeed your retarded aswell, spoiled child? .......... please...

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Kyoroichi on Sat Aug 17, 2013 7:14 am

bluEyEz wrote:You're just a spoiled child, if you don't accept the criticism talk with the noob people on YouTube who always say "I like your video, it's fantastic, awesome, you're the BEST".
~Oh my freakin' god... I don't want to hear how to do things from someone who is not better than me is like you are the boss of some company and you ask the people who are lower than you on how to do your job ? So indeed your retarded aswell, spoiled child? .......... please...

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Kisagi on Sat Aug 17, 2013 9:02 am

The most arrogant person I have ever seen

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by bluEyEz on Sat Aug 17, 2013 9:44 am

Kisagi wrote:The most arrogant person I have ever seen

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by 995Gabber on Sat Aug 17, 2013 10:53 am

Dis mentality... Where do I get that?

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Domius on Sat Aug 17, 2013 11:29 am

Domius wrote:Domius wrote:
"People hide the facts even to themselves because they're afraid of having to change their opinion." (Marco Travaglio)
vipertrix wrote:Pas mal 9/10
I'm pro <3
Kisagi wrote:The most arrogant person I have ever seen
I know people who are worse than him unfortunately.
bluEyEz wrote:"~Oh my freakin' god... I don't want to hear how to do things from someone who is not better than me"
I might as well say I'm better than you, I would have the skills and abilities to do it but i don't.
what about you, who are you? You're only a spoiled noob who takes part in Enigma Team's Mep(AHAHAHAAHAHAHAAH)
who the hell are you? Are not you ashamed? E N I G M A   T E A M AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH MAREMMA SE FAI BRUTTO.

Why you said that you're better than me? Since you have more views? Since you have more subs? AHAHAHAAHAHAHAAH

You said also in an other video:
"Someone was jelous of my perfect editing .......... .......... .........."(cit.)
You're ridiculous, you don't know what is the true editing.

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Breaker on Sat Aug 17, 2013 12:02 pm

This is some intense shit

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Kisagi on Sat Aug 17, 2013 12:52 pm

www

Breaker wrote:This is some intense shit
Some crazy shit

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Kyoroichi on Sat Aug 17, 2013 12:57 pm

bluEyEz wrote:
Kisagi wrote:The most arrogant person I have ever seen
Welp. Its time for old chris here to say something, If you don't want criticism don't post on the forum. All they were trying to do was help you, if you don't want to improve, then stay shit fgt. Stay in your youtube community let them applaud you for your horrible and flawed AMVs, I'm not even sure how you became so intolerable as of lately but you have and with that being said....

GO AWAY FGT

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Re: VoidGirl

Post by Vipertrix on Tue Aug 20, 2013 9:46 am

pas mal 9.5

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