[AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me

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[AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me

Post by Overcreed on Thu Jun 06, 2013 2:39 pm

Yo, I've finally completed. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit done in a hurry but I can not complain. In comparison to my previous work this is the best, but I want to improve again and reach a very high level of editing Smile I hope you like it.



DL: http://www.mediafire.com/watch/o59zc3qb3yysb6a/%5BOvercreed%5D_Forgive_me.mp4

Author: Overcreed
Studio: NeroTeam
Anime: Fate/Stay Night - Fate/Zero - Fate/C (Game Opening) - Kara no kyoukai - Steins;Gate
Song: Versus the word - Forgive me


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Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me

Post by Kyoroichi on Thu Jun 06, 2013 2:54 pm

You ignored everything I told you to fix.

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Post by Kisagi on Thu Jun 06, 2013 3:04 pm

It's pretty nice

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Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me

Post by Overcreed on Thu Jun 06, 2013 3:05 pm

Kyoroichi wrote:You ignored everything I told you to fix.
I removed the dark color´╗┐ and I made the mask like you said.

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Post by Kyoroichi on Thu Jun 06, 2013 3:28 pm

It was still a bit dark for whatever reason and the buildup was too bright you should have lowered the opacity, you made the clips move way too fast, you depend on speed too much, try different transitions other than zooms, fades..etc. Although the AMV is not bad there are quite a few things you need to fix, the first thing I would suggest is learning more transitions wheather it be masking or not and try not to depend on the super movement on the clips too much its hard to see whats going on.

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Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me

Post by Overcreed on Thu Jun 06, 2013 4:17 pm

Kyoroichi wrote:It was still a bit dark for whatever reason and the buildup was too bright you should have lowered the opacity, you made the clips move way too fast, you depend on speed too much, try different transitions other than zooms, fades..etc. Although the AMV is not bad there are quite a few things you need to fix, the first thing I would suggest is learning more transitions wheather it be masking or not and try not to depend on the super movement on the clips too much its hard to see whats going on.
Next time I'll be careful not to make mistakes ^^

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Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me

Post by Vipertrix on Fri Jun 07, 2013 12:28 am

I really think this clip could have been top level if you paced it well but anyways you have great potential, I'm always looking forward to your amvs from this amv i think you need to work on following the music more closely. acceleration (too much) there is no feeling to most of the clip especially the calm moment.
but anyways I'm looking forward to your next Razz Also welcome back

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