Live or Die - TritioAFB

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Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by TritioAFB on Mon Apr 01, 2013 4:34 pm



My first video as member of Nero Team. Special thanks to [key]scarlet, FarmXD and AimoAio for the betatesting here



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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by zero4real on Mon Apr 01, 2013 5:11 pm

Sorry but for some reason I didn't like it that much, it was nicely edited and the beginning was attracting but the song looked like it had nothing to do with the anime and overall it looked like watching a normal episode with a random song on it that is synced, maybe it needed more scene variations and the text was pretty bad too since the viewers probably didn't understand what it meant including me and the text made the video look like a trailer. Also I saw you had some issues with mask transitions, they could have been a lot smoother. There were some other minor things I didn't like but I won't go into the details.
Not hating on the video but the anime choice could have been better and some of the transitions could have been executed a little better.

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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by TritioAFB on Mon Apr 01, 2013 5:21 pm

It's ok my friend, since this vid was leaving me a weird impression everytime I was watching it. But since it's the first of the rest that comes, I expect the combo leaves a better impression in the future

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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by Guest on Mon Apr 01, 2013 6:56 pm

I disagree, I enjoyed it, although your transitions between some scenes could have been better instead just hardcuts and fades, whether the song had anything to do with the anime or not, I think the story was straightforward and the text wasn't that bad, maybe you could have translated it, that would have been better but still enjoyable but you still had a few minor problems ^^

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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by Kisagi on Mon Apr 01, 2013 8:25 pm

Oh I see what you were doing, nicely done!

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