[TheRedflash66&SCARL3TAMVs]Tempting: First Action

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[TheRedflash66&SCARL3TAMVs]Tempting: First Action

Post by Kisagi on Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:06 am



This is a collab with me and my bro Sultan ^_^. We haven't collaborated in a while so I asked him if he wanted to so he accepted. While working on this I was giving him a few tips on how he can improve his editing and what he can do in future amv's. For me, I had a lot of fun doing this even though we both are very busy with our own personal stuff we managed to finish this and it turned out very pleasant.

Well, I hope you guys like this^^ Very Happy

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Re: [TheRedflash66&SCARL3TAMVs]Tempting: First Action

Post by Snaggle on Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:46 am

Wasn't bad but could've been a lot better. During many parts the scenes were as dynamic as they needed to be and the pacing didn't match up well with the song but otherwise good job, keep at it.

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Re: [TheRedflash66&SCARL3TAMVs]Tempting: First Action

Post by Kisagi on Fri Jan 25, 2013 5:00 am

Knight wrote:Wasn't bad but could've been a lot better. During many parts the scenes were as dynamic as they needed to be and the pacing didn't match up well with the song but otherwise good job, keep at it.
Thanks Smile

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Re: [TheRedflash66&SCARL3TAMVs]Tempting: First Action

Post by TritioAFB on Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:07 am

I'll do a copy paste from my lst comment:

Starting:

I got the concept. Even though the scene selection makes it kinda difficult to understand it, I still can see it. Now there are some points I have to mention:

-The differences between the sources. I still don't get it, you could have done an approximation between them by changing them and looking for other sources that look similar and the final video would have probably looked better.
-Typography. Don't you worry, this is a problem between all makers I know. You have to work in it. The one you chose, I didn't like how it blended with the video. This also goes for future posters.
-Disstribution of effects and transitions: It's not just the fact of 'I add this effect for the sake of the effects' it should be logic and understandable why the effect/transition is there and not just to add them without reason
-The fact someone used this song (or a remix I dunno) doesn't mean this video has to be compared with other videos. Unless the other creator really CREATED the song him/herself, then it's ok the comparison. But if not, it's useless to start with the premise:

'But this guy used the same song here (video)'

Because the AMVs are so different, nor we're not even the owners of the material used
-I would have liked to take you for the Level Up. You seem to have the potential to make something awesome but you have to work in several aspects, in order to make that possible.

Don't you worry man, everyone has to start from a point

It's true that the video itself could be better, but still, you have to keep practicing, good job man

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Re: [TheRedflash66&SCARL3TAMVs]Tempting: First Action

Post by Kisagi on Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:20 am

Thanks man

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