[Zuuki' & iKuZze] - Take The Breath -

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[Zuuki' & iKuZze] - Take The Breath -

Post by iKuZze on Wed Dec 31, 2014 6:12 pm



DLink :  http://www.mediafire.com/watch/o9dbbenok5w1ai9/Take_The_Breath.mp4

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Re: [Zuuki' & iKuZze] - Take The Breath -

Post by Snaggle on Wed Jan 14, 2015 6:39 pm

Hey, thanks for posting your video here.  I'll get into what I thought of it.

To start the video could use some clarity in the scenes. It was hard to tell what was going on, and as is often the case in action it gets a bit random but even if it's random you still want to know what's going on and at times it just became a mess. The synch and tempo of the video could also use some work. Many parts which could have been synched interestingly just kinda use one scene to cover multiple beats/sounds. There were still cool parts like at 0:40 - 0:45 but there could have been many more. As for the tempo of the video, it just doesn't really change, like at 1:32 when the song slows down the random action continues at the same speed and really makes the video bland as it stays the same all the way through. In terms of atmosphere it kinda lacks one which is partially due to the song/pacing but still, except for a few parts it doesn't really incite many feelings which simply adds to those feelings of it being bland.

On a technical side it wasn't bad at all but it was the same effects and types of transitions that I see in almost every other video in the genre which cause the video to fall into obscurity and not have it's own identity.

Overall it wasn't bad but it was just very bland, I would really like to see you guys apply your skills in different ways since it's obvious you have them but didn't really translate them to making the best video you could. I apologize If I sound a bit harsh the video wasn't bad it just wasn't really that great either, it had nice parts but won't really be something which I or many people will remember.

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