Wasting Away

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Wasting Away

Post by Agito on Thu Dec 11, 2014 2:30 pm

Yolo peoples, this is my second work! Ill try to make something new, so yeah, hope you like it! Enjoy! Btw tell me my mistakes, i want some criticism from you!






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Re: Wasting Away

Post by Kyoroichi on Fri Dec 12, 2014 2:34 am

huge improvement!

0:12 careful with your pan/crop, its really weird and doesn't help the sync at all

0:53 be careful with transitions like this, the skull stops moving for a second and it makes the transition look really unnatural.

I really loved 1:24 - end it was really cool, it came to an unexpected stop because I know the song I wish it was longer!

anyway really good improvement Twisted Evil

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