The Power Of Youth!

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The Power Of Youth!

Post by Agito on Thu Dec 11, 2014 2:28 pm

Hey guys! It's My first work! i want some criticism from you!                                                  





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Re: The Power Of Youth!

Post by Kyoroichi on Fri Dec 12, 2014 2:28 am

0:00 - 0:17 was a really cool build up even though I thought the kakashi and obito scene shouldn't have been there, it looks badly placed.

0:28 when using a leaf transition like this you should make sure it blends properly with the oncoming scene in this case it didn't, no trees or anything in the background just a leaf blows and HOLY SHIT HERE COMES RIN DYING! same problem with 0:48 random leaf Razz

1:16 - 1:17 the itachi mask scene is really dark compared to the scene before, it throws it off for a bit

I have to say some of your masks were really really unnecessary haha, there is no need for a lot of masks! be mindful of how you transition, you even used brightness and contrast transitions too much xD

On the bright side its still a cool amv even though its naruto, gg!

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