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Post by Jocker8clz on Fri Apr 25, 2014 5:44 pm

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Hi guys Smile
I just had some random style in my mind that I wanted to see my self in ... so I find the right song and started editing it .

so I know it's not my best ...but I only made it in like 6-8 hours ...
but it was really fun editing this style Smile
hope you like it ...and tell me if you want to see more of this style or not ...or mixing it with my current one ...


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Editor : Jocker8Clz
Anime : Bakemonogatari - Nisemonogatari - Nekomonogatari
Song : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GbOeP8mUciI
Program :  AE CS6
Download : https://www.mediafire.com/?qs05i54qb9sxzbg



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Post by xChromez on Fri Apr 25, 2014 8:32 pm

Really nice build up  Razz Too bad you didn't finish it :'(

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Post by Rikudo on Sat Apr 26, 2014 11:41 am

You should start making longer amvs, applying a story at least. The video itself is random, I am not saying that the story is essential, but this video doesn't have any concept. You used too much crossfades which make the video really annoying and repetitive. The scene selection doesn't follow any logic, since the start. Some effects were cool but the ghosting (or flame blending) completely destroy everything. Ok I hope I explained myself with a not horrible english but at least I hope you will improve in your basics which are really meh...

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Post by Breaker on Sat Apr 26, 2014 12:39 pm

Yo!
I agree with Rikudo the effects are cool and all and those 3d cam movements look cool but you should focus more on your basics sometimes simple is better.
The pace was nice ^^ Rikudo basically said everything
Looking forward to your next project and good luck in the future o/

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Post by Jocker8clz on Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:24 pm

Really Thanks guys for feedback Smile
But I just made this to try this style ...wasn't planing to put any story or anything there ...just random selection of scenes with some edit Smile
I had to finish it in short time because of school ..that why the ending was bad Smile
But I will take break until summer ( 7 weeks ) and I will back with something Good and full Smile
Thanks again for feedback ... means a lot Very Happy

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Post by Kyoroichi on Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:17 pm

Man you have an gigantic amount of potential, I would just wouldn't rely on the crossfades too much, mix it up trying different ways of transitioning from scene to scene rather than crossfading but good job on those cool effects :3

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Post by Crookz on Sat Apr 26, 2014 6:04 pm

^^^
I agree with kyo, your fx are really nice, but you don't really make videos, their more of "edits" if that makes any sense. pretty vids as always though

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