[MEP] Cage the Beast

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[MEP] Cage the Beast

Post by Crookz on Tue Apr 22, 2014 4:35 pm



Part 1: Pieetrr - https://www.youtube.com/user/sgtpeterarbit - Darker than Black
Part 2: Me/Crookz - https://www.youtube.com/user/CrookzAMV - Kyoukai no Kanata
Part 3: Kylie - https://www.youtube.com/user/BeautyxPain102 - Gurren Lagann
Part 4: Brittnie - https://www.youtube.com/user/GodFire91 - Fairy Tail

Music: Adelitas Way - Cage the Beast

DL: https://www.mediafire.com/?mp9y7gtn93gh636

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Re: [MEP] Cage the Beast

Post by PinkMamba on Tue Apr 22, 2014 11:19 pm

Kanata means water cup in a silly way in greek,rekt,never used anime again.

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Re: [MEP] Cage the Beast

Post by Vipertrix on Wed Apr 23, 2014 1:22 am

I see you guys got creative with the title name and zik /:

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Re: [MEP] Cage the Beast

Post by Crookz on Wed Apr 23, 2014 2:42 am

Vipertrix wrote:I see you guys got creative with the title name and zik /:

brooooooooo I thought it over a million times :'( but just went with generic city cuz I couldn't think of anything

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Re: [MEP] Cage the Beast

Post by Vipertrix on Wed Apr 23, 2014 7:02 am

lol

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Re: [MEP] Cage the Beast

Post by Vipertrix on Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:32 am

Yellow!

Track 1: I find the camera movements abrupt and rough (too forced), some filter use is nice like the first 6 seconds but a bit messy
at as it progresses from then on. Need to work on basics overall and camera movement

Track 2: Pacing is abit slower then other tracks and compared to the music. I found that the colors and brightness/contrast
don't match well on some segments (0:38, 0:44) . Try matching them accordingly to get a smoother look;
Dark with dark <---> Light with light (goes for colors aswell for example Pink doesnt work well in darkness because it is a lighter color
^^)

also you need to complete the actions you set out otherwise it doesn't make sense for example 0:45 when she is flying with
a stick (not sure name) its as if she's about to hit someone,something but then it cuts away to someone else flying!!! it takes
a breath away.

Track 3: Pretty nice overall Gurren Lagann ftw!!

Track 4: Tracks got some nice transitions but overall it felt really random with no real sequence of events
you need to work on an idea to show the audience so it becomes less random and more focused. Small ideas for the track could have been
Nastu fights Jellal over the erlza treatment but it feels you have had all these ideas put into one that it makes it harder to get your idea
and doesnt make sense overall.

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Re: [MEP] Cage the Beast

Post by Crookz on Thu Apr 24, 2014 12:07 pm

@viper appreciate you putting the time in, I agree with pacing, also with the colors (the pink mask) kawaii as fuck couldn't leave it out Razz. And I agree about the mask coming in, it changes abrupt and I had the same thought process as you, should I leave it in or not because their is no slash unless if I use a different scene at a shitty angle. But I decided to leave it however ;3. but thanks again, I'll let them know ^

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Re: [MEP] Cage the Beast

Post by Bigalaxy on Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:53 pm

Cage the bite, nikez vos mères et donnez moi votre énergie!!!!

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