Yato - Kami of war (Noragami AMV )

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Yato - Kami of war (Noragami AMV )

Post by TheEmperor511 on Wed Apr 16, 2014 1:15 am

Hi everyone ... How you doing ? I hope you doing well .

I really enjoyed watching this Anime so I decide to do Amv for it .

Anime : Noragami

Music : dangerkids cut me out

My Opinion : I think it was better to not upload it now because they are many thing that I want to re-edit it and the end I did it two quick but my exams are next week so I want to start study for it ....

Anyway hope you enjoy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mESRCEeRDww

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Re: Yato - Kami of war (Noragami AMV )

Post by Kisagi on Sun Apr 27, 2014 1:18 pm

I will make a proper critic on this in 1-3 days give me time (yes not just an opinion)

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Re: Yato - Kami of war (Noragami AMV )

Post by Kyoroichi on Sun Apr 27, 2014 7:09 pm

not this band again...not bad but avoid using the basic transitions that you used a lot ._. though i really liked 0:00 - 0:13 after that I felt like everything got messy, some of the effects used were pretty unnecessary but keep working at it \o

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Re: Yato - Kami of war (Noragami AMV )

Post by Vipertrix on Sun Apr 27, 2014 11:06 pm

Hey!

I find quite different which I like about it, many different ideas compared to the usual generic crap  Razz. Regarding the amv one of the main problems is Brightness/Contrast + Color matching. Many of your transitions don't run smooth visually because your not matching colors and lighting well. some examples in seconds. (32 - 36, 38 , 40 - 41,) A good example of color and brightness matching (42 - 44)

Another main problem is it's messy. Many fades that are pretty bad, constant change from black and white to color, unstable zooms, color mismatch. So yeah work the basics and try avoid these things that make your clip messy, cleaner is better - Vipertrix

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Re: Yato - Kami of war (Noragami AMV )

Post by Kisagi on Thu May 01, 2014 4:52 am

Yo! So here is my critic. I will do it similar then what I used to do it, but a bit different. So here we go!

Originality:
I liked it since it was very different than what everyone else does and it keeps interest. Just be careful on your thoughts because some things can turn out random if you don't pay attention to that so watch out for it. Once you do that you should be fine. 4/5

Masking:
Not bad, needs some work though and as it appeared in this video, you rely too much on it. Lay back on it you do not need so many. It is not the masking that makes the video good it's the layout and concept. There are a few problems I saw as well and looked like the mask was rushed and the feathering didn't do well. Try spending time in your masks to make it look cleaner once that happens then you should do pretty well. 3/5

Overlay:
The scratch overlay is what was the problem, it's too noticeable. Try lowering the opacity a bit or something so it can look right. 3/5

Effects/Transitions:
Not bad, just watch out the way you use them. When using opticle flayers try not using it too much or it will get a little annoying to some people. Then the flashes such as the brightness/contrast effect, to me it felt pretty overused in the beginning and started to increase the usage. Try lessening the effect so it won't feel too repetitive. For your transitions they need to be a bit smoother, just like the masking, need to put more time in the transitions and it will look beautiful after. 3/5

Timing/Pacing:
Had it's good moments and had it's interesting moments. 4/5

Text:
The one time you used it I thought it was pretty interesting. 2/5

Overall:
Pretty interesting to where I liked it. It's nice that you did something different. Keep going this way and you'll turn out fine. Nice job dude. 3/5

Enjoy^^
Keep it up!

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