[RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)

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[RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)

Post by RealShinteki on Thu Jan 02, 2014 7:03 pm


DLL: http://www.mediafire.com/watch/oyzyge4h2m3ict2/amv-crash.mp4
Editor: RealShinteki
Anime: Black Lagoon
Song: 12 Stones - Crash
Contest Participating/ed: Enigma's Time 2nd Edition IC
Description:

It could've been a lot better, i half-assed the second action part of the amv because i ran out of scenes/time and got bored of the song so it's kinda lame :/...
And yes i know the transitions are repetitive and dynamics are off here and there :/... Oh well, it will be better next time!
And i got 4th place solo and 5th place overall which is more than awesome for me since this was my first time joining an IC \o/
Other Credits: Beta testers! <3

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Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)

Post by Rikudo on Thu Jan 02, 2014 9:08 pm

Well you said all xD i don't like the scene selection much in the first 15 secs, it was a bit random; zooms and shakes are repetitive and some time the timing is off but still a nice joob for a 3 days ic ^^

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Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)

Post by Kyoroichi on Fri Jan 03, 2014 12:26 am

I think you have great potential in you hah but you need to work on those cam movements, in my opinion they were really messy :/ and your shakes need a lot of improvement as well, the way you transition from scene to scene is really repetitive and the brightness and contrast was really messy for me as well but like I said I think you have great potential, not bad anyways.

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Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)

Post by RealShinteki on Fri Jan 03, 2014 12:41 am

Rikudo wrote:Well you said all xD i don't like the scene selection much in the first 15 secs, it was a bit random; zooms and shakes are repetitive and some time the timing is off but still a nice joob for a 3 days ic ^^
Haha yeah i know all of those stuff, i'm not really proud of this amv that much but i just wanted to finish the amv (didn't want to drop out from my first ic xD) only the first action part was somewhat solid in my opinion :/.. I'll be sure to do it better next time! Thanks for the feedback dude i appreciate it!

Kyoroichi wrote:I think you have great potential in you hah but you need to work on those cam movements, in my opinion they were really messy :/ and your shakes need a lot of improvement as well, the way you transition from scene to scene is really repetitive and the brightness and contrast was really messy for me as well but like I said I think you have great potential, not bad anyways.
Thanks! And yeah it's true, i was kinda experimenting with camera movement in this vid (if you watch my previous vid you'll see i never really did it like this before xD).And some of the shakes were already in the anime (those strong ones) but i know i need to work on them, i'll try to do them better in the next vid Very Happy. And i usually always try to find a way to transition to another scene using some kind of mask transitions (like i did at beginning of first action part) but then i slowly lost motivation and just wanted to finish the vid so i just went on with corner transitions which were indeed repetitive as hell, it would deffo turn me off from watching the vid if it wasn't mine lol. And for the brightness contrast thingy, yeah so true :/.. I'm trying to find a way to do flashes really smooth but i don't know how to yet, still experimenting with them. Thanks for the feedback, means a lot!
Will be sure to post next amv here Very Happy

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Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)

Post by Kisagi on Fri Jan 03, 2014 1:37 pm

Not bad

じゃね~

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Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)

Post by RealShinteki on Fri Jan 03, 2014 1:43 pm

Thanks Very Happy

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