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Post by Benreparn Tue Nov 26, 2013 4:04 pm

[Benreparn] Feelings That We Share 69-1110914946_benreparn_p

My Video for this years akross, had fun making it despite being under pressure XD

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Music: I See Stars - The Hardest Mistakes, I See Stars - Electrical Forest

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Post by Kyoroichi Tue Nov 26, 2013 4:54 pm

0:41 - 0:45 - I personally don't like it, the pink was too bright imo

1:46 - I don't like the eye zoom in but this is prolly because I hate when people use this particular scene in general for a eye zoom in

2:04 - 2:28 - Scene selection was a bit off from the rest of the video

2:33 - That effect ;-; meh didn't like that one at all

Vagina at the end, you sly dawg
Other than that I enjoyed it a lot aha pretty nice ole benson Very Happy
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Post by Benreparn Tue Nov 26, 2013 5:54 pm

Kyoroichi wrote:0:41 - 0:45 - I personally don't like it, the pink was too bright imo
I like it like this actually, maybe a matter of taste.

Kyoroichi wrote:1:46 - I don't like the eye zoom in but this is prolly because I hate when people use this particular scene in general for a eye zoom in
It is very overused yeah, I understand what you mean

Kyoroichi wrote:2:04 - 2:28 - Scene selection was a bit off from the rest of the video
I agree I kinda dropped the ball on that part and wasn't satisfied with it, but well I don't know, I just couldn't make it feel right.

Kyoroichi wrote:Vagina at the end, you sly dawg
Well you know, I figured, if people don't like the video they may enjoy a vagina and change there mind...... wait... IT'S NOT A VAGINA! ;O
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Post by Rikudo Tue Nov 26, 2013 6:00 pm

It's not bad! I really liked some parts (for example 0:50 to 1:20) and the scene selection is good Razz maybe I don't like the deadman clips (because for me they dont fit with the rest). Btw good luck for the contest Razz
P.s. That vagina at the end <.<
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Post by Kisagi Wed Nov 27, 2013 12:38 am

Not bad, though for Akross it's not really anything new nor special. Good luck though
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Post by Vipertrix Wed Nov 27, 2013 1:31 am

Yop!
I find some of your ideas nice but there are some parts that lack cleanliness for example some cross-fades looked a bit rough 0:23 aswell as some overlayed masks like that  of 0:35 and the abrupt change from dark to a light scenes. But overall I find it quite enjoyable as a whole, One part I especially liked was 1:13 - 1:24 Razz Looking forward to your next!
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Post by Nos Wed Nov 27, 2013 4:32 am

So chris and viper said like basicly everything ;_; i cant say much.
1:03 - didnt realy like how the mask just suddenly appeard
1:25 - the feather feels a bit too much
1:49 - the 2nd eye zoom could be better if the mask was smaller and feathered extreamly high
this was enjoyable to watch and good luck in akross.
ps. hope that vagina at the end gets u good placement Wink
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Post by Hikado95 Mon Dec 02, 2013 6:15 pm

Nice job Very Happy!!
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