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[Benreparn] Feelings That We Share

Post by Benreparn on Tue Nov 26, 2013 4:04 pm



My Video for this years akross, had fun making it despite being under pressure XD

Anime:
Various:
Various [ 5 Centimeters Per Second, AKB0048, Angel Beats!, Black Rock Shooter (TV), Black Rock Shooter: The Game (Game), Boku wa Tomodachi ga Sukunai, C3, Chihayafuru, Code Geass: Hangyaku no Lelouch, Dance in the Vampire Bund, Deadman Wonderland, Denpa Onna to Seishun Otoko, DJMAX Portable (Game), DJMAX Portable 3 BGA (Game), Ef - a fairy tale of the two, Eureka Seven AO, Evangelion: 2.0 You Can (Not) Advance, Fate/Zero, Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood, Hyouka, Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai, Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai: Megami-hen, Kamisama no Inai Nichiyoubi, Kamisama no Memochou, Kannagi, Karas, Kokoro Connect, Kyoukai no Kanata, Last Exile: Ginyoku no Fam, Macross Frontier, Mobile Suit Gundam 00 Second Season, Monogatari Series: Second Season, Ore no Imouto ga Konnani Kawaii Wake ga Nai, RideBack, Root Double - Before Crime After Days - Xtend Edition (Game), Rosario to Vampire, Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo, Tales of Xillia - Milla (Game), Tales of Xillia 2 (Game), Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann: Kirameki Yoko Box - Pieces of Sweet Stars, The iDOLM@STER, Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S, Top wo Nerae 2! Diebuster, Xblaze Code Embryo (Game), Zetman, Zetsuen no Tempest ]
Music: I See Stars - The Hardest Mistakes, I See Stars - Electrical Forest

Stream:
Download:
_Benreparn_-_Feelings_That_We_Share_alt.mp4]http://akross.info/ac2013/[AKROSS_Con_2013]_Benreparn_-_Feelings_That_We_Share_alt.mp4

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Re: [Benreparn] Feelings That We Share

Post by Kyoroichi on Tue Nov 26, 2013 4:54 pm

0:41 - 0:45 - I personally don't like it, the pink was too bright imo

1:46 - I don't like the eye zoom in but this is prolly because I hate when people use this particular scene in general for a eye zoom in

2:04 - 2:28 - Scene selection was a bit off from the rest of the video

2:33 - That effect ;-; meh didn't like that one at all

Vagina at the end, you sly dawg
Other than that I enjoyed it a lot aha pretty nice ole benson Very Happy

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Re: [Benreparn] Feelings That We Share

Post by Benreparn on Tue Nov 26, 2013 5:54 pm

Kyoroichi wrote:0:41 - 0:45 - I personally don't like it, the pink was too bright imo
I like it like this actually, maybe a matter of taste.

Kyoroichi wrote:1:46 - I don't like the eye zoom in but this is prolly because I hate when people use this particular scene in general for a eye zoom in
It is very overused yeah, I understand what you mean

Kyoroichi wrote:2:04 - 2:28 - Scene selection was a bit off from the rest of the video
I agree I kinda dropped the ball on that part and wasn't satisfied with it, but well I don't know, I just couldn't make it feel right.

Kyoroichi wrote:Vagina at the end, you sly dawg
Well you know, I figured, if people don't like the video they may enjoy a vagina and change there mind...... wait... IT'S NOT A VAGINA! ;O

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Re: [Benreparn] Feelings That We Share

Post by Rikudo on Tue Nov 26, 2013 6:00 pm

It's not bad! I really liked some parts (for example 0:50 to 1:20) and the scene selection is good Razz maybe I don't like the deadman clips (because for me they dont fit with the rest). Btw good luck for the contest Razz
P.s. That vagina at the end <.<

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Re: [Benreparn] Feelings That We Share

Post by Kisagi on Wed Nov 27, 2013 12:38 am

Not bad, though for Akross it's not really anything new nor special. Good luck though

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Re: [Benreparn] Feelings That We Share

Post by Vipertrix on Wed Nov 27, 2013 1:31 am

Yop!
I find some of your ideas nice but there are some parts that lack cleanliness for example some cross-fades looked a bit rough 0:23 aswell as some overlayed masks like that  of 0:35 and the abrupt change from dark to a light scenes. But overall I find it quite enjoyable as a whole, One part I especially liked was 1:13 - 1:24 Razz Looking forward to your next!

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Re: [Benreparn] Feelings That We Share

Post by Nos on Wed Nov 27, 2013 4:32 am

So chris and viper said like basicly everything ;_; i cant say much.
1:03 - didnt realy like how the mask just suddenly appeard
1:25 - the feather feels a bit too much
1:49 - the 2nd eye zoom could be better if the mask was smaller and feathered extreamly high
this was enjoyable to watch and good luck in akross.
ps. hope that vagina at the end gets u good placement Wink

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Re: [Benreparn] Feelings That We Share

Post by Hikado95 on Mon Dec 02, 2013 6:15 pm

Nice job Very Happy!!

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