[Ellines Nakama] From the Depths

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[Ellines Nakama] From the Depths

Post by 995Gabber on Thu Oct 31, 2013 7:30 pm


Download link: http://www.mediafire.com/download/8tzr7xw42igx6iw/%5BEllines+Nakama%5D+From+the+Depths.mp4
Productions: Ellines Nakama
Author(s): MissTitannia / AlchemistEskimo / GodFire91 / CrookzAMV / 995Gabber / AoNoFlamez
Anime source(s): Ga Rei Zero / Baccano / Fate Stay Night (+ Unlimited Bladeworks) / Fate Zero / Hunter x Hunter 2011 / Bleach Hell Verse / Shingeki No Kyojin
Audio source(s): Fireflight - Stay close + Pendulum - The Island pt 2 (dusk)
Contest participated in: Enp MEP Battle Event
Other credits: The(amazing)GMSsJ for the lovely intro Smile

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Re: [Ellines Nakama] From the Depths

Post by Kisagi on Fri Nov 01, 2013 5:52 am

Not bad, to me the Baccano & Bleach part didn't quit fit in well with the song.

I'll leave an full op later if I have the time.

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Re: [Ellines Nakama] From the Depths

Post by 995Gabber on Fri Nov 01, 2013 10:39 am

Hmm not sure what you mean. The theme was to capture something hell-ish, so all the parts fit good if you ask me, and I made sure to relate to the lyrics of the song with bleach track (little bit) so yea.. I don't think they weren't that fitting actually.

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Re: [Ellines Nakama] From the Depths

Post by Kyoroichi on Fri Nov 01, 2013 10:36 pm

I don't have time time to post a full OP though I will say this:
Its not bad, though I'd say part 1 and 2 and had common mistakes, that being so many unnecessary cam movements.

Track 1, there was a lot of random and fast effects like black and white and brightness and contrast(0:50 and onward) I felt like as soon as the beat got heavier things just fell apart for this track because the slow part was fine.

Track 2 - I agree with kisagi when he says bacanno track doesn't fit but I'm referring to the art style, this track would have been way better if it didn't have the unnecessary and overpaced cam movements ._.

Track 3 - fave track, get em partner \o/

Track 4 - unnecessary brightness&contrast and text, there were weird pan/crop moments as well(killua's face)

Track 5 - not bad, though that manga effect thing that the person was trying to pull off was a fail xD and unneeded pan/crop at few points especially in the beginning

Track 6 - Yes the song got slower but the editing was way too slow, 3:43 - end was cool though

not bad guys, sorry that I can't give my full and legit opinion D:

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Re: [Ellines Nakama] From the Depths

Post by 995Gabber on Fri Nov 01, 2013 11:04 pm

Kyoroichi wrote:
Track 1, there was a lot of random and fast effects like black and white and brightness and contrast(0:50 and onward) I  felt like as soon as the beat got heavier things just fell apart for this track because the slow part was fine.
hmm.. Yea I agree, with all respect to Sara, she seemed rather confused in her track. Pressure of her 1st mep part I guess.

Kyoroichi wrote: Track 2 - I agree with kisagi when he says bacanno track doesn't fit but I'm referring to the art style, this track would have been way better if it didn't have the unnecessary and overpaced cam movements ._.
The art is indeed quite different. Gotta admit I was worried about that for some time, but it all went well since the transition in and out of the track were good. About the cam movement I must say I disagree, since I personally loved (and still do) them quite much. Perhaps you just personally dislike pans.

Kyoroichi wrote:Track 3 - fave track, get em partner \o/
pff kiss ass Lol.

Kyoroichi wrote: Track 4 - unnecessary brightness&contrast and text, there were weird pan/crop moments as well(killua's face)
Perhaps. Can't say if I agree or disagree. I just know it looked good, and I personally liked it Smile

Kyoroichi wrote: Track 5 - not bad, though that manga effect thing that the person was trying to pull off was a fail xD and unneeded pan/crop at few points especially in the beginning
Now now, be nice @___@ about the pans, hmm.. now that you mention it they do look kind of odd, but I believe its the negative flash that is making it that way (maybe)

Kyoroichi wrote: Track 6 - Yes the song got slower but the editing was way too slow, 3:43 - end was cool though
that is true. but yea, Boss ending and smooth slow part so I cannot complain Razz

Thanks for taking the time chris Smile

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Re: [Ellines Nakama] From the Depths

Post by Crookz on Fri Nov 01, 2013 11:21 pm

track 4 (mine) the power of the overlays! Twisted Evil
and cam moves are all down to style imo, no such thing as unnecessary in editing unless if your trying to copy something or someones style.

thanks for the feedback (things you didn't like list*)

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