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Post by bluEyEz on Thu Aug 01, 2013 8:17 am

New amv <3

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by Kisagi on Thu Aug 01, 2013 1:26 pm

Will put an opinion later after I wake up. All I can say is that I found this extremely boring.

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by bluEyEz on Thu Aug 01, 2013 8:01 pm

<3 i love you too :**********

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by 995Gabber on Thu Aug 01, 2013 8:34 pm

Didn't like it. + watch out from the velocity of your clips and transitions, like in the beginning it was rather ugly with that speed followed by that text that came out of nowhere.

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by bluEyEz on Thu Aug 01, 2013 8:38 pm

:**** what transitions baby be more creative with ur critize i understood u didnt like the first 2 scenes and u find it ugly because of that (lama)

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Post by 995Gabber on Thu Aug 01, 2013 8:50 pm

what a funny person we have here. You want me to provide my critiques with colored pages to be more creative? whatever man. I said what I had to say, and i'm sure I have presented myself clearly.

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by bluEyEz on Thu Aug 01, 2013 9:00 pm

awww i love it when u get all angry <3 meow

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by Kyoroichi on Thu Aug 01, 2013 10:25 pm

Side Note: If you're coming on the forum to aggravate people then don't bother logging in.

I've told you so many times to avoid fades when editing action parts its just plain ugly and lazy, the cam movements you did were very unfitting at times but it had its moments, then came the colouring and overlay, UGLY and MESSY. Work more on your transitions, its obvious that you did some and got better than you were before, just keep avoiding the fades like I told you, another note is your shakes are way too rough at times and you need to work on your atmosphere more, pacing and syncing wasn't too bad but it needs work, overall it wasn't anything special. Forgot to say you used fades way too much in the slower parts as well, personally nothing is wrong with fades once you used them correctly but yeah, way too messy.

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by bluEyEz on Thu Aug 01, 2013 11:33 pm

Kyo, i used 1 crossfade in the last action part and i used 1 more in the slow part ... how did u find this too manny ? ??????????
anyway about the cam moves i dont find them rough and heavy as u think and the colors with the overlayer may been a lil too much and not rly clean but that's rly what created that atmo and PLS PLS FOR THE SAKE OF HELL TELL ME WHAT transition you didn't like and think didn't fit ? ............... (lmao)
anyway thanks for ur time

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by Kyoroichi on Fri Aug 02, 2013 12:49 am

0:17 fade and it had more as the AMV progressed, its mandatory that avoid fades at all costs in the faster parts like I said its pretty lazy, one fade can be too much in an AMV its an eye sore, the colouring was pretty bad my "bro" too dark, there were a lot of other ways to go about getting the atmosphere right, you didn't have to go psycho with your red colouring and overlay, btw lower the opacity of your overlay to about 60-70% it makes it look much more clean, For future reference transitions can be fades, brightness and contrast, hardcuts, slides..etc.. it doesn't need to be masking transitions alone.
I was talking about all your transitions in general they were pretty messy but better than your older stuff.

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by bluEyEz on Fri Aug 02, 2013 1:08 am

OHOH FINALLY SOMETHING I CAN UNDERSTAND >.< (thou ofc i already know that) but man srs? u angry right now ? ??? AND PLS BRO DONT FORGET THIS NEVER FORGET THIS !!!!!!!!!!! EVERYONE HAS A OPNIONS AND TASTe, btw i tried to made it more psyho... obvsly.....ofc.............. Wink

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by Kyoroichi on Fri Aug 02, 2013 1:49 am

I'm not angry, I was just explaining, when I said psycho I meant you went crazy with it, in this case its not really a good thing aha, was way too dark, you could barely see anything

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by Snaggle on Fri Aug 02, 2013 5:28 am

someone's sassy Llama 

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by bluEyEz on Fri Aug 02, 2013 12:10 pm

MEEEEEEOW <3

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by Vipertrix on Sat Aug 03, 2013 2:51 pm

I agree with Kyo-chan, It is pretty messy. The lip sync was off, camera movements felt forced aswell as the shakes (unnatural) Overlay was strong (made it really hard to see) and pacing was too slow. A really rough edit overall. So yeah a lot too improve on for the future, adding to that please improve your behavior on our forum.

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by AlexxAMV on Sat Aug 03, 2013 5:22 pm

i suggest instead of overlaying that gradient...try putting it through ae as a ramp...linear or radial its up to you....on an adjustment layer...and play with the *blend with original*...much better than overlaying a random gradient..i am not good at action so cant comment on the actual vid with credible criticism...but that colouring was too strong..too much for me...i know wut u tried obtaining with it...but it eventually lacked finesse due to beeing to powerfull...cheers anyway

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Re: Deadman AMV

Post by Kisagi on Sat Aug 03, 2013 9:01 pm

Okay, in the beginning the way you started it of was okay just felt like something was missing and a few looked problematic. The text you inserted looked pretty bad and didn't stand out pretty well, you should have chosen another font or didn't have any text in there at all. The action part was not bad until you inserted the red coloring all of a sudden and went back to the original color. Doing that ruptured it a bit . Then after that you put an overlay and a gradient to add color. Once you did that you kind of ruined it a little by making it too dark and the overlay stranded out too much, you should have lowered the opacity of it.

When you got to that part another thing that kind of messed it up was that the scenes were too fast for the part. You should have slowed it down around there so things can turn out better. I also have to agree with Kyo with the too many fades thing, messed it up a bit.

For the coloring, if you had magic bullet that would help a bit. Just make sure you know what you are doing with it before rendering.

Overall, it was okay and I dislike it. Some parts were slow and some were too fast. GL on next!

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