[Paixtaras]-Regret(SpeedProof IC contest ACTION)

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[Paixtaras]-Regret(SpeedProof IC contest ACTION)

Post by MrPaixtaras13 on Mon Jul 01, 2013 10:16 pm

Anime:various
Song:Otherwise-Die for you
DL: http://www.mediafire.com/download/19pnkrm05d3107l/%5BMrPaixtaras13%5D-Regret+%28ACTION+CATEGORY%29.wmv
Desc: So this is my video for SpeedProof Contest 2nd edition ;p phew i finished on time..and so i kinda like the result,i hope you guys like it


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Post by WETRSDFHAWJCKVINOD on Mon Jul 01, 2013 10:23 pm

Nice flow, i liked some of your transitions. Smile

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Post by Kisagi on Mon Jul 01, 2013 10:53 pm

not bad, you need to work on your masks though because they were really repetitive and you used the same masks soo many times once or twice of the same one was enough. Also the way you used the optical flares was kind of bad, should have used them better. The pacing/timing could have been better as well. Lastly, you should try getting the anime without the tv watermark like in those fate/zero parts.

Overall, not bad a lot of things could be improved.

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Post by Kyoroichi on Mon Jul 01, 2013 11:03 pm

Not bad but repetitive transitions, pacing and syncing was weird and B&C use was bad, you also need to stay away from those fades, they're dangerous x_x Your AMV is some what bland it wasn't anything special but you need to wrk on a lot of things, atmosphere, pacing, transitioning, etc. Good luck for your next \o

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