[Sempai] The Outsider

This was pretty coo!

One of the anime I really loved since the day it came out. I liked it, very entertaining.

Why .amv in the title ? you forgot to change it ? xD

And next try to put a download Link , cause watching with streaming isn't that good and it's better for criticism :p

About the AMV :

00:19-00:33 A lot of fadings , you don't have to ^^ , sometimes just a cut is enough , with a little blur for example , because fading between two scenes isn't always too good , especially if the colors are different.

00:39 A BLACK SCREEN!NO! it's not really nice to see in an AMV , i see what you want to do , it can pass with a trailer but here , not really...

00:53-1:03 the same thing about fading

1:05 transitions like that aren't really good , above all on a CLOSE-UP!!!

1:09 no , it's not good , ideas like that don't give a good result unless it's really well done , or rarely ^^

1:13 watch out! lip flap on the two scenes of the paladin '' i forgot his name''

1:15 no! don't zoom out then zoom in on the same scene it's not good :p

1:13-1:17 calm dude! to many cam mouvements and all , it's a slow part ^^ , go easy on it , i prefer 1:19-1:28.

1:38 the mask isn't clean enough , i think you should have done it on more frames! on top of that a person appears above another perso...it looks weird xD

01:38-01:45 try to avoid as much as possible fading in an action part :p

01:57 DAT LIP FLAP! REMOVE IT! 

02:02 the same as before , you should have done the fading on more frames , here it's too abrupt 

The rest is fine!

My BIG comment ends here ^^ , i just wanted to comment this one because it's my favourite from you and i think that you keep improving and improving

Overall , it was really nice! keep it up dude ! Looking forward to your next one

Draga* 
That i calling a normal critic ;D thank you dude.

Ahah ! We don't find critics on youtube .You're welcome ^^ , here is my channel : www.youtube.com/user/dragaofficial , PM me if you need anything , i always check my letterbox xD , or skype : noureddine16702 , as you like ^^

Next amv now , GO GO GO :p