[Kisagi] Fighting;Girls

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[Kisagi] Fighting;Girls

Post by Kisagi on Sun May 26, 2013 4:33 am

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This video came out differently than I wanted. This has some mistakes and a few mess ups, but hopefully this appears enjoyable to you guys. I had some free time on my hands so I had decided to do this and get more ideas of a project that I"m working on.

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http://www.animemusicvideos.org/video/192063

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Re: [Kisagi] Fighting;Girls

Post by Guest on Mon May 27, 2013 1:10 am

You rely too much on hardcuts and you use too much static scenes, this song requires movement which you clearly didn't have and throughout the AMV you lacked a lot of elements, rhythm, proper pacing, atmosphere..etc..I think you should revisit some tutorials or at least ask some good editors to help you out..

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Re: [Kisagi] Fighting;Girls

Post by Kisagi on Mon May 27, 2013 1:28 am

Kyoroichi wrote:You rely too much on hardcuts and you use too much static scenes, this song requires movement which you clearly didn't have and throughout the AMV you lacked a lot of elements, rhythm, proper pacing, atmosphere..etc..
Yep you are correct on that. There are some movements, but not many and for the atmosphere and pacing I sort of messed it up within the first few seconds (wasn't paying much attention to it).

Kyoroichi wrote:I think you should revisit some tutorials or at least ask some good editors to help you out..

Yeah, for this I am currently having some editors help me out on one that I am currently working on. It's not action though and will take a long time to finish, but hopefully I get around to finishing it within 3-4 months.

Thanks for your comment!

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Re: [Kisagi] Fighting;Girls

Post by TritioAFB on Mon May 27, 2013 3:03 am

Like I said in the past I could be a help in the betatesting, this is because it feels like the music is faster than the video

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Re: [Kisagi] Fighting;Girls

Post by Kisagi on Mon May 27, 2013 3:33 am

TritioAFB wrote:Like I said in the past I could be a help in the betatesting, this is because it feels like the music is faster than the video
oh come to think of it, I'll send you another version of the video I sent you a while back once I get the time to change it and add more things to it since I came up with more ideas for it.

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