[Light] Carnival of Blood

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[Light] Carnival of Blood

Post by Light on Wed Mar 27, 2013 5:57 am

My video for big contest 2013 ^^
made this just for fun, didn't think i would win or anything xD

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Re: [Light] Carnival of Blood

Post by Kisagi on Wed Mar 27, 2013 6:47 am

Not bad

I'll leave an full OP later

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Re: [Light] Carnival of Blood

Post by Guest on Wed Mar 27, 2013 2:58 pm

Well its not bad, but there were quite a few errors..
0:00 - 0:08 - This was decent, although the sync was a bit weird
0:09 - 0:13 - Transitions and shakes were a bit sloppy
0:13 - 0:22 - Not bad but be careful with those fades
0:22 - 0:25 - Didn't like those zoom outs, the were really messy
0:26 - 0:48 - really decent but there was a really bad fade at 0:29
0:49 - 0:50 - NO.
0:51 - 1:13 - My favourite part but again some parts were weirdly synced
1:14 - 1:15 - Bad fade again
1:15 - 1:19 - Not bad
1:20 - sloppy transition
1:21 - 2:03 - Not bad but there were some obvious mistakes made like some useless flashes and and sloppy transitions..(masking and fades)
2:04 - 2:11 - this part is decent
2:11 - 2:13 - that was bad, WAY TOO choppy
2:14 - end - not bad lol, I'd be a hypocrite if I was to say bad credits haha
In overall it was enjoyable but you need to keep up with the rhythm of the song, looking forward to your next amv! ^^

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Re: [Light] Carnival of Blood

Post by Light on Wed Mar 27, 2013 4:33 pm

thx man ^^

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Re: [Light] Carnival of Blood

Post by Vipertrix on Wed Mar 27, 2013 10:33 pm

nice song and amv, i enjoyed this just some things that need to be worked on 0:03 the scenes were too dynamic for the calm bit of the song and I thought that 0:18 the transition wasn't as clean and 0:54, 1:08 try fading out between the clips under the mask if you know what i mean this can make the transition much cleaner.

I'm not going to go too far into it, I think Kyoroichi has done a great job with that so
Good luck with your next

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Re: [Light] Carnival of Blood

Post by zero4real on Thu Mar 28, 2013 4:04 pm

You know the amv is not good when the slow part of the song is more intense than the action part Neutral|| I edited this song myself and the chorus part is really bitchin and imo you need to keep everything in motion during it. Not just a half second transition. You have some nice transitions and effects but you definitely need to improve your sync or better the feel of the song if that even makes any sense, FEEL THE SONG XDDD

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